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Submitted: January 5
Image Size: 2.8 MB
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Make:NIKON CORPORATION
Model:NIKON D7000
Shutter Speed:10/2500 second
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Focal Length:50 mm
ISO Speed:125
Date Taken:Jan 5, 2013, 2:24:40 PM
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Zorran -done for the dayby *AndersStangl

Photography / Animals, Plants & Nature / Domesticated Animals

Zorran after practice.

Critique by ~Zaziss Jan 6, 2013, 2:44:20 AM

I think you ehanced the horse's look with a really nice way.
The background is just sketched thanks to the same color between the closing and the sky, you could not do that with a colorful picture, and it's really graphically good.
Maybe a little expansion of the framing would be interesting : The subject would more circled by the white of the sky could be more "protruding". Maybe it could give you an idea ? So I think is a really little detail !
So is a really beatiful image like that, and is a great shot with a cute and expressive horse !!! Well done !

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*HeavenlyHoofbeats Mar 30, 2013 New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist

This is just lovely. I am loving looking at your photagraphy and I love that most of it is black and white. It's refreshing to see after only seeing color everywhere. Amazing...

*AndersStangl Mar 31, 2013

Thank you, appreciate the feedback

~ValeRomy Mar 2, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

AMAZING...LOVE IT SO MUCH!

*AndersStangl Mar 2, 2013

Thanks appreciate the feedback

~daputerman Jan 5, 2013 Hobbyist Artisan Crafter

I love this image - not sure I see 'fuzziness' - I can count the hairs on Zorran's face. I also like the person 'cut off' because this conveys that this is an animal who is cared for and loved by humans (they are part of his life), but Zorran clearly is an animal who is his own master, in a sense. Not to be tamed by a mere human. Having the person all the way in the picture would take away this sense of 'wildness'. You can see he senses everything she is doing - she is a minor character. I've looked at a lot of Ander's work - this composition is intentional.

*AndersStangl Jan 6, 2013

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it. The composition is -like you say- intentional Zorran is the subject.

~HumanArt-Photography Jan 5, 2013

Beautiful image. My only critique- It is a bit too fuzzy- the image. And I think maybe zooming out, so the person isn't cut in half, might have been a better image, better balanced, but I am not sure on that. Great job with this, and beautiful horse.

*AndersStangl Jan 6, 2013

Thanks for the feedback, really appreciate it. The composition is intentional, Zorran is the subject. However....I think it would have worked with the whole human also but that had been another story, more a 'Daily Life' photo than a portrait. Will give that a try next time

Once again, thanks for taking the time writing the critique !

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